some narrative development

the first crit i had when i went back set my final image back a little bit because of slight changes, another suggestion was to use the less refined felt pen style i have developed to create a series of vignettes, telling the story of the protagonist in the final image. this is some development from that, to give it context, a drunk person stumbles into a monastery putting an ancient mask on his face, but it gets stuck. 

the thumbnail in the top right best describes the scene, it is quite rough though. 

 the centre figure and monks will make up the story with the few images below filling in the gaps,